The Story Begins
I guess you can call this the pilot strip.
You know, whatever kind of project you're working on, the pilot is always the hardest to do, because the pilot is essentially the backbone to the whole project, it's where you have to introduce people to the characters, the settings, the situations, etc. A pilot can make or break a series: good pilots are really informative and insightful, such as the pilots for shows like Bewitched, I Dream of Jeannie, and Green Acres; other times, pilots are random and somewhat nonsensical, depending on how you view them, such as pilots for M*A*S*H, Hogan's Heroes, Sanford and Son, etc.
I think this pilot is somewhere in the middle of that scale, I don't think it's either bad or good, but it is certainly random... I just wasn't sure how I wanted to kick off the storyline, so I went with this little idea.
The main characters cute and I love the background template.
I'd also love to see the 'Bewitched' pilot episode, I loved that show but I don't think I've ever seen it.